Happy birthday kassouminou!by *Howlingreaches

Digital Art / Drawings & Paintings / Animals

Happy birthday, hon!! I drew up Teague as a gift! I hope you like it. I tried to add more shading and highlights. He's stunning!

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First time using the critique button, please be gentle >.<

Critique by *avonRDA Nov 13, 2012, 8:19:21 AM

This is really good HowlingReaches! I love the way you have experimented with the shading to make it look realistic. The hoofprints are fabulous and they are in the right proportion with his feet, a hard thing to do! The eye looks realistic, and you got the mane and tail right. I know it is like this in the reference picture but the position is quite strange. He has a lack of shadow and, correct me if I'm wrong, he seems to have walked into the arena through the fence, unless there is a gate there. I like the muscle shading although the 'breast' looks quite strange. Overall, very good job!

(I tried not to be too harsh)

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